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			I am writing this paper for my college english class on animal rights and wanted to see if anyone here would mind giving me their feedback? It is just maybe 2 paragraphs... still a work in progress but I need  some feedback to see if I am on the right track... let me know  & I will email you what I have so far! Thanks!! 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			 
		
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			I don't know much on animal rights to be able to give you an honest opinion as far as an english paper.  I mean I have my opinion on how animals should be treated, so if you want my opinion, I'll PM you my email address.
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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			You can send it to me. I know some about animal rights & I made an A in english comp I & II.  
		
		
		
		
		
		
			 
		
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			ok ladies... thanks!
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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			I am sure your paper will turn out wonderful.  Like Janet said, I too am not totally familiar with all the animal rights etc.  Just have opinions and not sure if those are what your truly need in your writing assignment. 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			I bet you'll get a big red "A" on your paper! Good luck! 
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			thanks sheryl.....
		 
		
		
		
		
		
		
			
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