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I am writing this paper for my college english class on animal rights and wanted to see if anyone here would mind giving me their feedback? It is just maybe 2 paragraphs... still a work in progress but I need some feedback to see if I am on the right track... let me know & I will email you what I have so far! Thanks!!
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I don't know much on animal rights to be able to give you an honest opinion as far as an english paper. I mean I have my opinion on how animals should be treated, so if you want my opinion, I'll PM you my email address.
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You can send it to me. I know some about animal rights & I made an A in english comp I & II.
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ok ladies... thanks!
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I am sure your paper will turn out wonderful. Like Janet said, I too am not totally familiar with all the animal rights etc. Just have opinions and not sure if those are what your truly need in your writing assignment.
I bet you'll get a big red "A" on your paper! Good luck!
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thanks sheryl.....
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